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A Few Keys to Writing Effective DialogueKaryn Follis Cheatham Every writer expends a great deal of creative energy developing a story line and limning well-balanced prose with evocative sentences. Thats what writing is all about, after all. But fiction writers have an additional aspect to creation--effective dialogue. Very few stories, novellas or novels are without dialogue, and for some writers, this can be a stumbling block. Listen to How People Talk If you listen carefully to how people speak, youll notice that people tend to use shorter sentences in times of high emotion: anger, surprise, awe. "I cant take this! Get out!" versus "I find this situation intolerable. I want you to leave right now." They ramble a bit when theyre nervous or confused. "I know this isnt what you wanted, but I wasnt sure which way to make the diagram fit best on the page so I brought both copies with me. I hope you dont mind." Young children tend to get pronouns confused or leave out articles: "Me go to store with Gramma." Youll begin to recognize how different personalities have different word usage and diction. All of these observations can be incorporated in the dialogue you write. The best grammar isnt always used, either. Even people who write well, dont always speak well. "Ive got to get that new CD of Carlsons," takes precedence in speech over the more correct, "I have to buy Carlsons new CD." Word usage and contractions that you might avoid in narration become quite logical in dialogue: "Theres no more to see, so lets get outta here." Use Dialogue as Enhancement To be most effective, use dialogue as an extension of your story line and character development. Lets say you have a character, Jane. Shes late to the airport. She gets in a taxi and tells the driver she has to hurry to the airport. He agrees. Well, those are the facts, and it could be left strictly to narration: Jane shoved her way into the cab and slammed the door as she told the driver to hurry to the airport. He agreed. Or dialogue could be used. These examples show how different Jane characters could speak and how the energy of the scene is increased. Plain Jane: "I have to get to the airport really fast. Can you do that" Cabby: "You betcha." Jane of the streets: "The airport, bro, and hit it!" Cabby: "Im on it!" Jane the executive: "Airport. A big tip if you make it quick." Cabby: "Yes, maam!" Jane the professor: "To the airport, please, and Im in a hurry." Cabby: "Certainly." You notice the cabbys response was dictated by Janes words, making the scene more believable. Inconsistencies between peoples words and actions should be used for a reason and also noted. For instance, if Jane the professor had said "The airport, bro, and hit it!" The cabby might have jerked to look at her, or the narrator might have commented how Jane chuckled inside at her language--or, both. Writing effective dialogue is an art all its own and one that should be honed with observation and rewriting. Truly knowing your characters is essential. Reading scenes aloud to yourself or others writing groups are good for this will increase your ability to hear the rhythms of sentences and recognize good not necessarily proper word usage. With diligent practice, this creative aspect of your writing will become second nature and flow evenly with your story and literary style. c2004 by Karyn Follis Cheatham
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